Here is what the marketing team wrote for the Message of the Day on the university's computer network. Would love it if you could read it and tell us what you think or oif you think we've missed something out etc.
Third Year Theatre Production Presents
'The Bloody Chamber'
With a combination of theatre, dance and vocal skills, the third year performing arts theatre production cast are proud to invite you on a tale of love, sex and curiousity in Bryony Lavery's adaptation of Angela Carter's 'The Bloody Chamber'.
The performance will take place at The Oval House Theatre on 25th, 26th and 27th March at 7.30pm. Tickets are FREE!!! But please book.
Box Office: 020 7582 7680
Nearest tube: Oval (Northern line)
Also, could Fabio and Thomas please send us their biog's for the program as soon as possible?
And a quick question for Lucy... could you give us emails of visiting lecturers at London Met, such as Tara etc?
Thanks everyone
Amie
I like it - concise and to the point.
ReplyDeleteA few comments/opinions:
* 'Curiosity' is mis-spelled
* It should be 'invite you to' not 'invite you on'
* The title, 'Third Year Theatre Production Presents' could suggest that this is a Theatre Studies show - just a minor quibble but personally I think it should say 'Third Year BA Performing Arts Presents' simply because most people reading it won't know a) the distinction between Performing Arts the course and Theatre Production the module, and b) that Performing Arts is an actual course within L.M.U...
* Could there be some enticing references to tango, opera and, maybe, something to do with the Gothic aspect of the show? Perhaps 'Gothic sexuality'? Or something like that? Personally I think that the sex and tango will help to sell it
* Lastly, could there be a link to the Facebook event page? So many students are on there that it might be good to include the link and glam up the page with the flyer image and some rehearsal photos to arouse interest
Love your work Marketing peeps
xxx
Agree all DinahJudith comments. I can give you all the mails I have - and if you want them today I think Simeon has a list I gave him of all HPL's.
ReplyDeleteAlso can you send me an electronic version of leaflet for my friends.